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Statement of intent tutorial

Kacper Mark: 2 Grade: E Comments on Statement of Intent: ·          You’ve obviously changed your idea which will have a knock-on effect but this is still a long way from where it needs to be. ·          The gang/urban drama concept can work – but remember the coming-of-age genre usually focuses around one character that the audience can identify with. I think your opening needs looking at to make this clear. ·          Written English is a concern – the very first sentence of the statement contains three errors. Spelling, punctuation, grammar all need to be perfect. ·          You may want to make the beginning easier to follow – title, tagline, genre etc. Do you have a title? A working title can work for now (O13?) ·          It is still too vague in places – it ...

Coursework: Pre-production - Mise-en-scene

Costume Costumes will include thing such as tracksuits, hoodies, jeans (baggy), black masks and gloves. Masks will be used to create enigma codes of action, crime and mystery. Baggy jeans will be used to emphasise the urban environment my characters are from. Lighting I will use whatever lighting is outside to create a more authentic feeling, and cosidering It will be shot in London it will most likely look very gloomy. anything inside will have natural lighting to create and continue that realistic feeling. If needed I will use phones flashlights to make it brighter. Actors My characters will be played by people who can easily portray the character they need to, and I will show each gang as always being together to symbolise them as being united and supportive of each other. Make-up I will use make-up to show wounds after a fighting or shooting scene.  Props I will be using a motorbike, several guns to create action codes for the audience that they can identify and r...

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WIKTOR AND IGOR ARE WALKING DOWN AN ISOLATED QUIET ROAD AS THEY TALK BETWEEN ONE ANOTHER Wiktor: So what now? Igor: Well, we ask boss if he's happy with the job and then wait for the next one right? Wiktor: Yeah yeah. Igor: [Polish] Gonna call him now? Wiktor: [Polish] No. Igor: Alright suit yourself man.. Wiktor: You ever thought about doing school on a more serious note? Like actually try get some good grades or something? Igor: Nah seems boring as hell. Wiktor: [Clearly frustrated] Yeah, Yeah you right..   FLASHBACK SHOWING THE DUO CHASING AN O13 MEMBER, CATCHING UP TO HIM AND BEATING HIM UP AND STABBING HIM.  O13 Member Groaning and shouting for help Wiktor and Igor Also groan and grunt as they beat him up They both get up off the floor staring at each other seeming out of breath. THEN BACK TO PRESENT TIME Wiktor: Think he survived it? Igor: Hopefully not. Wiktor: Hm. PHONE CALLS, BOTH STARE AT IT BEFORE IGOR PICKS IT UP Igor: [Polish] Hell...

Statement of intent

Statement of intent My movie will be about two rival gangs, in West London who's on going feud is re-fuelled. The war will be fuelled by trying to take over turf. The movie will mainly focus on the highest ranking members from O13 and low ranking members from the mafia who will be portrayed as street thugs. The rivalling gangs are O13 and an unnamed mafia. My movie will reinforce stereotypes of Black people joining gangs from a young age, and Eastern European mafias. I will give stereotypical clothing to both sides. O13 will be wearing baggy jeans, big puffer jackets, hoodies etc, and the Thugs will be wearing Adidas tracksuits. I will include scenes that suggest drug abuse, drug dealing and use of weapons but I will try my best to not explicitly show any of these things.  I will stick to the brief to make sure I meet every requirement especially in terms of creating enigma with the use of lig hting and costumes. I hope to create meaning through the way my characters are d...

Coursework: Ignite presentation learner response

1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each category.    1) Concept  5/5    Structure   5/5   Terminology   3/5   Rehersal  4 /5 WWW: Really good storline, well planned EBI:N/A 2) Concept  5/5    Structure   4/5   Terminology   4/5   Rehersal   4/5 WWW: Great movie idea, has a clear motive EBI: Some pauses inbetween slides 3) Concept  5/5    Structure   5/5   Terminology   4/5   Rehersal   4/5 WWW: Well explained EBI: N/A 4) Concept  4/5    Structure   3/5   Terminology   2/5   Rehersal   3/5 WWW: Well explained and easy to understand, good structure and covered all aspects with good rehearsal. EBI: More theories 5) Concept  5/5    Structure   5/...

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Coursework: Summer Project 2018

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Film trailer 1: Narrative and genre The narrative behind "The intent" follows a group called TIC and their come-up. It focuses on how the group goes on a murderous spree of robberies after the success of the first one. The trailer showcases the robberies briefly giving the viewer a small insight on each of the characters and a backstory of one of the characters giving the viewer a hint of what may come up in the movie. It's loosely linked to the coming of age genre, and is more of an urban action drama, but aspects of the coming of age genre are present with the childhood of one of the characters being shown. Film trailer 2:   Mise-en-scene The mise-en-scene throughout creates meanings, such as certain characters clothing. Hoods create meaning of being form an urban, lower class and poorer background. The use of props such as knives, bats and guns shows the lifestyle and dangers the characters may face giving the audience an idea of the personalities and charac...