Media Blog 2 - Mr Halsey

1) Type up your feedback/comments from your teacher. WWW:Excellent cinematography Good handheld camera Good scripting Good Framing Low angle shot Good performance Good ideas; Slow mo EBI: Quiet Dialogue  Focus on flow mo Follow instruction Shot/reverse shot not included  2) Type up your feedback from fellow students. WWW: Good acting Good use of angles Good pan cross Good framing Panning  Multiple angles Funny EBI:Audio too low Slo-Mo out of focus Follow the brief 3) Now reflect on your video. Did you meet the brief and successfully include the three key editing aspects we have learned? We missed the reverse shot, and we missed the door match on action. We also had really low audio which we need to improve for next time. 4) What were the strengths and weaknesses of your final film? Write a detailed analysis picking out specific shots, edits and any other aspect of film language you think is relevant. Our strengths where our acting, location and multiple

SCRIPT EXT. METAL STAIRCASE DAY 1 - 06/12/17 TWO BOYS (KACPER AND MOHAMMAD)ARE WALKING DOWN METAL STAIRS AFTER THEIR LESSON. KACPER How do you not get any girl man? MOHAMMAD I don’t even know man it’s just girls these days… KACPER Bruv its not girls its you, you can’t get no girls man MOHAMMAD Don’t even say that tho I can KACPER But it’s the truth MOHAMMAD I chat to a new girl every week what you on about? THE TWO BOYS THEN TRANSITION TO THE SECOND SET OF STAIRS WHERE THEY MOHAMMAD THEN NOTICES A GIRL SITTING ON THE STAIRS. MOHAMMAD Are you sure I can’t get a girl? KACPER 100% MOHAMMAD There’s a girl right there, I’ll bet you £15 I can get her number. KACPER Cool £15 yeah? Let’s do it THEN TRANSITIONS TO A PAN OF THE GIRL SITTING ON THE STAIRS WHERE IT GOES BACK TO THE BOYS AS MOHAMMAD IS WALKING DOWN THE STAIRS MOHAMMAD Yo b… Can I get your number? GIRL No? MOHAMMAD Why not GIRL I’ve got a man MOHAMMAD So what?