Coursework: Ignite presentation learner response

1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each category. 
 
1) Concept  5/5    Structure   5/5   Terminology   3/5   Rehersal  4 /5

WWW: Really good storline, well planned

EBI:N/A


 2) Concept  5/5    Structure   4/5   Terminology   4/5   Rehersal   4/5

WWW: Great movie idea, has a clear motive

EBI: Some pauses inbetween slides


3) Concept  5/5    Structure   5/5   Terminology   4/5   Rehersal   4/5

WWW: Well explained

EBI: N/A


4) Concept  4/5    Structure   3/5   Terminology   2/5   Rehersal   3/5

WWW: Well explained and easy to understand, good structure and covered all aspects with good rehearsal.

EBI: More theories


5) Concept  5/5    Structure   5/5   Terminology   4/5   Rehersal   4/5

WWW: Nailed the presentation

EBI: Think about representations of the characters


6) Concept  4/5    Structure   4/5   Terminology   3/5   Rehersal   4/5

WWW: Good presentation

EBI: Differentiate narrative to different movies.


7) Concept  4/5    Structure   5/5   Terminology   5/5   Rehersal   5/5

WWW: Excellent delivery

EBI: More pictures


8) Concept  4/5    Structure   4/5   Terminology   4/5   Rehersal   5/5

WWW: Good delivery and concept

EBI: How to make it different to other films?


9) Concept  5/5    Structure   4/5   Terminology   4/5   Rehersal   5/5

WWW: Very good concept and organised presentation.

EBI: More media terminology

MS quinn: 
I like that you're not just focusing on one genre to appeal to a wider audience. Why is it called End Game? Are they going to do one big job or something? Or just to get out of the game?

2) Use this feedback, comments from peers and your own reflection on your presentation to self-assess and write a detailed WWW and EBI for your own coursework concept and presentation as a whole.

 WWW: A good overall idea which is clearly laid out and explained. Good use of camerawork and editing conventions. Good choices and preparations in terms of props and characters.

 EBI: Focus on some more theories and link the tagline to the movie more, make it more relevant and clearly involved with the movie.

3) Write a paragraph discussing how your presentation will lead into your actual coursework production. Do you need to update your statement of intent? Does your narrative offer enough clarity? Is it appropriate for the audience specified in the brief? Does it fit the genre you are aiming for? Can you add media terminology or theory to your statement of intent now you have reflected on your presentation and seen others?

 After having reviewed my idea in-depth and getting feedback from several people, I have decided to change my idea a little bit based on the fact that filming will take a couple of days and I may struggle to have enough actors for the production.

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