Statement of intent tutorial
Kacper Mark: 2 Grade: E Comments on Statement of Intent: · You’ve obviously changed your idea which will have a knock-on effect but this is still a long way from where it needs to be. · The gang/urban drama concept can work – but remember the coming-of-age genre usually focuses around one character that the audience can identify with. I think your opening needs looking at to make this clear. · Written English is a concern – the very first sentence of the statement contains three errors. Spelling, punctuation, grammar all need to be perfect. · You may want to make the beginning easier to follow – title, tagline, genre etc. Do you have a title? A working title can work for now (O13?) · It is still too vague in places – it ...